Room 4's Writing

Last weekend the big tree fell down. Now we just have a stump. It still has its roots. Meg thought that we could put some swings there, I thought that we could plant some flowers, Hadi thought that we could plant some vegetables there and last of all Issy thought that we could put a slide there. – Abby

In the weekend the big tree fell down. Oh no! Issy got three stacks of the wood. Issy’s mum and dad would’ve been happy. I liked the big tree because it was shady. When I came to school I couldn’t see the tree. It was a beautiful tree. I love the big, big tree. It was awesome. Where the tree was I think threre should be a swing. – Meg

Our big tree got cut down. I am sad. We could put a trampoline there or we could put some flowers. – Elise

In the storm the storm split the tree in half. The builders had to come and cut the tree. In the weekend a man came removed the tree. – Roman

One day there was a big storm and there was a big old tree. The tree fell down. There was wood for free. I got three piles of wood. We have to use the wood next year. Now we have lots of wood. My dad helped to clean up. We went in the ute and there was lots of wood. – Issy

One day a big storm came. It broke down the school’s tree. It also broke the fence. A few days later some men came and cut the rest. I think we should put some swings in the place where the tree fell down. I also think we should make a path that we could walk through and plant some flowers around the path. I’m sad that the tree fell down but if the men hadn’t cut it down it could fall on someone. So I am happy and sad. – Lucy K